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I'm lost and I don't care
And nothing can be done about it
There can never be a change for the better
Because there’s nothing to gain in it

Whoever dares our cause reveal
Shall test the strength of Knightly steel

They know exactly what they want
And give it only when you concede defeat
You’ve traded love for death
And honesty lost in complete conceit

And when the torture proves too dull
We’ll scrape the brains out of his skull

The hidden hand completes the circuit
Vanish from my consciousness
They are searching for something
But the quest is meaningless

And place a lamp within the shell
To light his soul from here to Hell

We imagine ourselves to be in charge
We don't know where we're going
This won’t be a happy end
Now stands deception’s offspring
"In the beginnings of the structure of society they were subjected to brutal and blind force; afterwards to Law, which is the same force, only disguised. I draw the conclusion that by the law of nature right lies with force." - The Protocols of the Meetings of the Learned Elders of Zion

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ShoelaceMonster Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2005
I love the piece. I was thinking favorite, but the ending kinda ruins it. The beat is thrown off or something, it doesn't sound like an ending. But you've somehow inspired a drawing... maybe it'll end up on Deviantart sometime.... hmm.... I loves it, thought ~heart~
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archaeobibliologist Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Professional Photographer
Aww, thanks.
The ending is a little odd. I'm still trying to revise it.
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jrsaldana Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2005
depressing when you don'y have a way out...I do have one, and let me invite you come with me....and share the hope.


very good work my friend:)
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archaeobibliologist Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Professional Photographer
Aww. thanks. I've got a way out though...
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